Friday, November 9, 2007

If I can change one thing about me.

It would be my life, my attitude, my choices
My mind, my looks, and most of all my past.
I wish I had the power to change everything.
Cause all this got me no where but away from home.
So if I can change one thing about me it would be all this.

Charityn

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

good details i liked what you said you would change

-Zach

Anonymous said...

I like how you added lot's of details about how you you would change, but next time write about what you wouldn't change something about you.

By Carolina

Anonymous said...

i agree with carolina dont just focus on the negatives about your self it brings you down.

-Randi

Anonymous said...

What do you mean your past?
Dulce

Senorita Jorge said...

Everyone's made bad decisions in their past. The good thing is that we can make good decisions in our future.
~ Ms. George