Friday, November 9, 2007

Dream

I keep having this dream, I'm pushing' my little sister on the swing.
She keeps screaming, she don't want me to leave
"You're making Mommy cry, why? Why is Mommy crying?"
Julie, Jesse is not leaving no more, as she says "Jesse you're lying
"You always say that, you always say this is the last time
"But you are not leaving no more, Jesse you're mine"
She's piling boxes in front of the door trying to block it
"Jesse please, Jesse don't leave, Jesse - no stop it!"
Goes in her pocket, pulls out a tiny necklace locket
It's got a picture, "this'll keep you safe Jesse, take it with you'"
I look up, it's just me standing in the mirror
These stinkin walls must be talking, because man I can hear 'em
They're saying "You've got one more chance to do right" - and it's tonight
Now go out there and show that you love your family 'jess before it's too late
And just as I go to walk out of my bedroom door,
It's turns to a cop car , they're gone, and this hand cuffs are on
And I'm saying, I love you Julie, and don’t give up on me just yet, and as I
Drive away she says I just wish he would do right,
Then I wake up alarm clocks beeping, I get up and start stretching, and as I
Eat my cereal, I cant stop thinking that’s not the life I want my family to remember me as having.


JESSE

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

It doesnt say where your going or why, and you took the lyrics from a song so it not really about you.


----TYLER

Anonymous said...

good detals i like how describe the dream.

iyan

Anonymous said...

your story was really good

Anonymous said...

sorry i for got to put my name


-A.L

Anonymous said...

I really like the details you used like where you say what your sister is saying and when you say that your walking out your bedroom and it turns into a cop car.

-Diana

Anonymous said...

That was awsome you are a great writer. keep up the great work